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@@ -3,8 +3,9 @@
 <h1> A Simple Errand</h1>
 <p>
   <span class="quote speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
-  Annie looks up. That&apos;s where she has to get off. She only needs to
+  Annie looks up. That&apos;s the station she has to get off at. She only
-  be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual for Jack.
+  needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual
+  for Jack.
 </p>
 <p>
   The train comes to a halt in the station. Annie steps out onto the
@@ -30,15 +31,16 @@
 <p>
   Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
   doors. She walks up to the counter. <br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span> The guy
+  <span class="quote speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span><br />
-  behind the counter smiles. <span class="quote speech">Borrowing the next
+  The guy behind the counter smiles.<br />
-  stack of fantasy books?</span>, he asks. <br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Borrowing the next stack of fantasy
+  books?</span>, he asks. <br />
   <span class="quote speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as
   she takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
   for</span> &ndash; she glances at the piece of paper &ndash;
-  <span class="quote speech">a manual for a Neotek B three three F Y dash
+  <span class="quote speech">a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F
-  A F bunker door.</span><br />
+  bunker door.</span><br />
   The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library
   card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
   <span class="quote speech">I&apos;m afraid, that it has recently been

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     Annie needs to go to meet the library guy
   </li>
 </ul>
-<p>
-  Pulling the secondary drive out of the rack takes an unusual amount of
-  force. The crunchy bearings scratch on the rails as they get dragged
-  forward. After struggling for a bit, Jack finally reaches the point
-  where the top cover and the empty compartment for a removable platter
-  are fully exposed. He undoes the thumb screws holding them in place,
-  then he slides the assembly forward and takes it out, revealing the
-  circuit boards, motor, and spindle with fixed platters beneath. A fine
-  silver line along the edge in the otherwise brown coating of the top-most
-  platter shows where its upper
-  head had crashed &ndash; a deep scratch but, with a bit of luck, this
-  might still be recoverable. He undoes two more
-  thumb screws on the inside and the face plate of the drive comes off.
-  Using a small flashlight that he had found in one of the desk cabinets,
-  he inspects the three platters: The one on top turns out to be the
-  outlier, its underside and both of the other platters have thick
-  silver-y white stripes lining their edges.
-  <span class="quote speech">Well, there goes that pipe dream.</span>
-</p>
-<p>
-  Jack puts the drive back together
-</p>
 <p class="comment">
   This has been moved here from chapter 1 &quot;Wake Up&quot;. It should
   be integrated into this chapter instead.