'mc' Welcome Home: fix a typo, add two commas
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It takes them a while to get to the road. The pavement is cracked with
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plants growing out of it. Ahead of them is a bridge over a small river.
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They cross it about half-way where Annie stops and turns to the railing.
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She almost leans against it, befefore a thought shoots into her mind:
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She almost leans against it, before a thought shoots into her mind:
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<span class="quote non-speech">What if it breaks?</span>
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She grabs on to it and shakes ... herself. The railing stands firm.
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<p>
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Jack joins her looking down at what's below and says:
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Jack joins her, looking down at what's below, and says:
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<span class="quote speech">Learning quickly, huh?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Seeing it once is good enough.</span><br />
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A small stream flows there, cutting deep into the ground, lined by
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