'va' Alone: revision
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Tony's cure – no matter what risk it posed ... – maybe
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Tony's cure – no matter what risk it posed ... – maybe
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some of them would have made it.</span><br />
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some of them would have made it.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">What about you?</span> Emily asks with a
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<span class="quote speech">What about you?</span> Emily asks with a
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slither of hope in her voice.<br />
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sliver of hope in her voice.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">No – no cure can save me, it's too
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<span class="quote speech">No – no cure can save me, it's too
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late.</span><br />
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late.</span><br />
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Emily tears up. <span class="comment">note: Slightly. Is there a better
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Emily tears up. <span class="comment">note: Slightly. Is there a better
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it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
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it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
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alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span>
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alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span>
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Emily sits down next to Lena again, but there is no conversation.
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Emily looks at Lena – she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily
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Emily sits down across from Lena, radio still on, but there is only silence,
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was looking she opens them, looking directly at her.
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occasionally broken by the crackle of cosmic radiation. She looks at Lena
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<span class="comment">Gripping?</span> her hand as she speaks.
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– who had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily was looking, she opens
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<span class="comment">some meaningful last words?</span> Then she lets go
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them, looking directly at her, taking her hands and holding them tightly
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and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing.
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as she speaks:<br />
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<span class="comment">wording</span>
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<span class="quote speech">There will come a day when you have no choice but
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to leave. I hope that day will find you strong and brave to beat the odds
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again. You got this, little one.</span><br />
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Then she lets go and closes her eyes again. Emily moves next to her and holds
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her hand as Lena drifts away. A few minutes pass and she stops breathing.
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Emily sits next to Lena for a while, completely out of it, her mind
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Emily sits next to Lena for a while, completely out of it, her mind
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