'va' Alone: continue writing

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it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span> alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span>
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<p class="comment">
Emily sits down next to Lena again, but there is no conversation.
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<p> <p>
Emily looks at Lena &ndash; she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily Emily looks at Lena &ndash; she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily
was looking she opens them, looking directly at her. was looking she opens them, looking directly at her.
<span class="comment">Gripping?</span> her hand as she speaks. <span class="comment">Gripping?</span> her hand as she speaks.
<span class="comment">some meaningful last words?</span> Then she lets go <span class="comment">some meaningful last words?</span> Then she lets go
and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing. and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing.
<span class="comment">wording?</span> <span class="comment">wording</span>
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<p class="comment"> <p class="comment">
missing: Emily returns inside, lays down on the floor Emily sits next to Lena for a while, completely out of it, her mind
being numb.
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<p>
Her oxygen alarm goes off. Absentmindedly, she gets up and returns to
the habitat. She opens the air lock, enters, closes the outside, and
enters the inside. As she is putting away her suit, she realizes that
she had been following the procedures from muscle memory without even
thinking about them. She walks to the <span class="comment">???</span>
module and lays down on the floor staring into the sky.
<span class="comment">This module has to be described at some point
before this. It has panorama windows to all sides and a glass ceiling.
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