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it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
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it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
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alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span>
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alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span>
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Emily sits down next to Lena again, but there is no conversation.
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Emily looks at Lena – she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily
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Emily looks at Lena – she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily
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was looking she opens them, looking directly at her.
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was looking she opens them, looking directly at her.
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<span class="comment">Gripping?</span> her hand as she speaks.
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<span class="comment">Gripping?</span> her hand as she speaks.
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<span class="comment">some meaningful last words?</span> Then she lets go
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<span class="comment">some meaningful last words?</span> Then she lets go
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and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing.
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and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing.
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<span class="comment">wording?</span>
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<span class="comment">wording</span>
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missing: Emily returns inside, lays down on the floor
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Emily sits next to Lena for a while, completely out of it, her mind
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being numb.
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Her oxygen alarm goes off. Absentmindedly, she gets up and returns to
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the habitat. She opens the air lock, enters, closes the outside, and
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enters the inside. As she is putting away her suit, she realizes that
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she had been following the procedures from muscle memory without even
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thinking about them. She walks to the <span class="comment">???</span>
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module and lays down on the floor staring into the sky.
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<span class="comment">This module has to be described at some point
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before this. It has panorama windows to all sides and a glass ceiling.
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