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<h1>Telescope</h1> <h1>Telescope</h1>
<p> <p>
Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">I know the way.</span><br /> Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">I know the way.</span><br />
Jack extends his hand with the keys.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Wanna drive?</span><br /> <span class="quote speech">Wanna drive?</span><br />
Jack extends his hand with the keys.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Sure.</span><br /> <span class="quote speech">Sure.</span><br />
She takes them and the four get in the truck. A few moments later, She takes them and the four get in the truck. James joins Michelle in
Michelle pulls onto the road in front of the bunker.<br /> the front while Annie and Jack take the rear seats. A few moments later,
James asks: <span class="quote speech">How far is it?</span><br /> Michelle pulls onto the street in front of the bunker.<br />
James asks her: <span class="quote speech">How far is it?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">A decent bit. Used to be about an hour on the <span class="quote speech">A decent bit. Used to be about an hour on the
highway. If it&apos;s in even somewhat decent shape, I&apos;d say highway... If it&apos;s in even somewhat decent shape, I&apos;d say
we&apos;re gonna make it there in about that time.</span><br /> we&apos;re gonna make it there in about that time.</span><br />
She turns right at an intersection onto the on-ramp, saying:<br /> She turns right at an intersection onto the on-ramp, saying:<br />
<span class="quote speech">Gonna find out very soon...</span> <span class="quote speech">Gonna find out very soon...</span>
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<p> <p>
The pavement is cracked and has potholes, and the highway is partially The pavement is cracked and has potholes, and the highway is partially
overgrown but, despite this, its condition is somehow good enough. overgrown but, despite this, its condition is somehow good enough.
Michelle floors it and the remains of the city outskirts flies by. Michelle floors it and the truck rattles and shakes as it accelerates
on the uneven asphalt. James <span class="comment">hangs on to the handle
</span>in the door as the remains of the city outskirts fly by.
Michelle notices it:<br />
<span class="quote speech">You don&apos;t need to hold on, that seat
belt is gonna hold you.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">How are you not absolutely terrified by the
speed you&apos;re going?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">You get used to it after a while... Also,
I know the capabilities of this car very well &ndash; I used to drive
one like this.</span>
</p>
<p>
Within a few minutes, they make it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley Within a few minutes, they make it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley
behind. The mountains make way for an area of plains and behind. The mountains make way for an area of plains and shallow hills.
<span class="comment">low, smooth</span> hills. She takes an exit onto She takes an exit onto another highway. The large, rusty signs above
another highway. The large, rusty signs above it still indicate the still indicate the proximity of Sentinel Shores where they haven&apos;t
proximity of Sentinel Shores where they haven&apos;t faded completely. faded completely. <span class="comment">feels like something is missing
here</span>
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
The highway takes them north, around the western part of Ivydale&apos;s The highway takes them north, around the western part of Ivydale&apos;s