'oa' Lab Rat: remove redundant outline, format a line of dialog
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Lab Rat </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back"><</button></a>
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<h1> Lab Rat </h1>
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<p class="comment">
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If you are here for reading, skip past the outline.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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Outline:
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</p>
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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At this point, there are three survivors on the moon base:
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Emily
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Lena
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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other crew member
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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The other crew member is close to dying
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Begin with dialog
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</li>
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Emily grabs a hammer and runs through the base followed by Lena
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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She reaches the lab and smashes the control panel for the dorr while
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running inside causing the door to close and lock
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</li>
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She drinks some left over chemical concoction
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possibly after messing with it following some instructions she finds
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Lena starts to break the door open, the other person just arrives there
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Emily's body is filled with pain and she falls to the floor
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</li>
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the door gets broken open just before she drifts out of consciousness
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</li>
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she drifts in and out of consciousness
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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getting carried down the hallway
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</li>
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in her bed vomiting
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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</ul>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
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Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice,
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why shouldn't we try it?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Tony also died after</span> – Sasha is
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interrupted by coughing – <span class="quote speech">after trying it
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<span class="quote speech">Tony also died after...</span> Sasha is
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interrupted by coughing. <span class="quote speech">...after trying it
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on himself.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to
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us...</span><br />
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