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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> A Simple Errand </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back">&lt;</button></a>
<h1> A Simple Errand</h1>
<p class="comment">
If you are here for reading, skip past the outline.
</p>
<ul>
<li class="comment">
Next day, Annie only has to be at work in the afternoon so she goes to
the library.
</li>
<li class="comment">
Arrival at the library
</li>
<li class="comment">
Ask for the manual
<ul>
<li class="comment">
it&apos;s recently been classified due to a bunch of ppl trying to
leave the dome
</li>
<li class="comment">
Librarian behind the counter says something like &quot;I have to
write down your details, let me get the list rq&quot; while
scribbling a note on her library card, then he winks at her and
nods to the door
</li>
</ul>
</li>
<li class="comment">
Annie leaves
</li>
<li class="comment">
Outside, she hears the Librarian say &quot;Dorothy, she took her
library card and ran, what do I do?&quot;
</li>
<li class="comment">
Annie hurries back to the station and gets on the next train
</li>
<li class="comment">
she reads the note on her library card: Meet at xyz metro station,
10:30 PM
</li>
</ul>
<p>
<span class="quote speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
Annie looks up. That&apos;s the station she has to get off at. She only
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Annie walks down the stairs and steps onto the square. It is brightly
illuminated by a large glowing sphere made of yellow and brown glass
tiles, suspended on steel cables that hang from four office complexes
towering over the rest of the buildings. To the right is the library,
a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front features
large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the building
giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the pillars has
multiple rows of windows.
towering over the rest of the buildings. <span class="comment">Add a more
detailed description of the general area.</span> To the right is the
library, a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front
features large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the
building giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the
pillars has multiple rows of windows.
</p>
<p>
Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
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<span class="quote speech">I&apos;m afraid, that it has recently been
classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
He musters her for a second, then he takes the card and scribbles
something on it before putting it back. <br />
He musters her for a second, then he takes the card, quickly scribbles
something on it, and puts it back. <br />
<span class="quote speech">I can check you against a list of people with
security clearance. One moment, I&apos;ll get it.</span><br />
He gestures towards the exit. Then, he turns around and walks towards a