03 A Simple Errand: minor revision

03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html

@@ -3,9 +3,8 @@
 <h1> A Simple Errand</h1>
 <p>
   <span class="quote speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
-  Annie looks up. That&apos;s the station she has to get off at. She only
-  needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual
-  for Jack.
+  Annie looks up. That&apos;s where she has to get off. She only needs to
+  be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual for Jack.
 </p>
 <p>
   The train comes to a halt in the station. Annie steps out onto the
@@ -31,16 +30,15 @@
 <p>
   Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
   doors. She walks up to the counter. <br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span><br />
-  The guy behind the counter smiles.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Borrowing the next stack of fantasy
-  books?</span>, he asks. <br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span> The guy
+  behind the counter smiles. <span class="quote speech">Borrowing the next
+  stack of fantasy books?</span>, he asks. <br />
   <span class="quote speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as
   she takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
   for</span> &ndash; she glances at the piece of paper &ndash;
-  <span class="quote speech">a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F
-  bunker door.</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">a manual for a Neotek B three three F Y dash
+  A F bunker door.</span><br />
   The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library
   card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
   <span class="quote speech">I&apos;m afraid, that it has recently been