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'zz' (End): wording fix 'the back' -> 'the rear end'

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@ -52,9 +52,8 @@
Looking at Annie, who seems visibly scared, he adds:<br />
<span class="quote speech">It&apos;s not gonna hit us, the odds of that
are pretty slim, but something&apos;s not right.</span><br />
As if on cue, the back of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a
cloud of fragments. <span class="comment">need a better way to say the
very back</span> The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking
As if on cue, the rear end of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a
cloud of fragments. The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking
multiple buildings down with it. The ground shakes slightly. Nobody says
anything for a while as they watch the buildings around the impact
crumble and the remaining parts of the shuttle rain out of the sky in a