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'zz' (End): wording fix 'the back' -> 'the rear end'

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Looking at Annie, who seems visibly scared, he adds:<br /> Looking at Annie, who seems visibly scared, he adds:<br />
<span class="quote speech">It&apos;s not gonna hit us, the odds of that <span class="quote speech">It&apos;s not gonna hit us, the odds of that
are pretty slim, but something&apos;s not right.</span><br /> are pretty slim, but something&apos;s not right.</span><br />
As if on cue, the back of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a As if on cue, the rear end of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a
cloud of fragments. <span class="comment">need a better way to say the cloud of fragments. The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking
very back</span> The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking
multiple buildings down with it. The ground shakes slightly. Nobody says multiple buildings down with it. The ground shakes slightly. Nobody says
anything for a while as they watch the buildings around the impact anything for a while as they watch the buildings around the impact
crumble and the remaining parts of the shuttle rain out of the sky in a crumble and the remaining parts of the shuttle rain out of the sky in a