Many of my comments like "translate this" or "what's the right word" have
been filled in.
Also, an honestly embarassing amount of spelling errors, missing words,
double words, and special characters that I normally replace (like using
– for a slightly longer dash instead of -).
I proofread everything. How this happens is beyond me but it does.
Regularly.
I'm pretty sure it's just because I know what it says, but I feel like you
could still kinda read it. Now, I'm pretty sure you can't without copying
or looking at the code.
This bug would cause the decoration script to run in an infinite loop as it
presumably attempts to decorate new elements it itself created.
(Can’t say for sure, I’m using Otter Browser on a Pentium M which isn’t
exactly the most ideal development setup. lol)
I originally wanted to let the story begin with Annie’s view of the
situation because I think that chapter is more interesting without
context but I have since decided that I’m just going to write Jack’s
intro in a way where it doesn’t provide said context.
This change probably still makes Annie’s intro less interesting but not
messing with the timeline is more important IMO.
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