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@@ -8,47 +8,56 @@
   The four are walking into a valley in a large forested area.<br />
   Jack replies: <span class="quote speech">Right now, I&apos;m not even
   sure this is the place &ndash; everything looks so different &ndash; but
-  if it is, we&apos;ll have plenty to choose from and a bunch more for
+  if it is, we&apos;ll have plenty machines to choose from and a bunch
-  parts.</span><br />
+  more for parts.</span><br />
-  James takes a sudden step to the side and rips the ivy off a roughly
+  James gestures to the side, saying:
-  knee-high, square concrete post.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Look, over there.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">This of any use to you?</span><br />
+  He points to a group of very rusty and completely overgrown machines.
-  The post has numbers engraved in all four sides.<br />
-  Jack reads two of them: <span class="quote speech">1581, 8480. Yup. This
-  is indeed the place.</span>
-</p>
-<p>
-  A bit further down the valley, they come across a large, rusty machine.
   <br />
-  Annie wonders: <span class="quote speech">How did this thing get
+  Annie asks: <span class="quote speech">How did they get inbetween
-  between the trees?</span><br />
+  the trees?</span><br />
-  Jack says: <span class="quote speech">Someone drove it here before
+  Jack says: <span class="quote speech">They didn&apos;t. The machines
-  the they grew. There were large cleared areas and access roads through
+  came first, the trees grew after. This area wasn&apos;t even a forest
-  the forest back then.</span><br />
+  back then.</span><br />
-  They walk up to it and take a look.<br />
+  They make their way over to take a closer look.
-  Jack turns to Annie and James, and says:
-  <span class="quote speech">This is an excavator. We&apos;re looking for
-  a big one like this, but in better condition.</span><br />
-  James asks: <span class="quote speech">What&apos;s wrong with this
-  one?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">This thing&apos;s just done for. It&apos;s
-  more rust than steel, missing its tracks, the hydraulics up there have
-  been removed, and it looks like someone got a bit carried away
-  <i>trying</i> to do the same with the cab.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Why&apos;d they do that?</span><br />
-  <span class="comment">Todo: rephrase above question</span></br/>
-  <span class="quote speech">Probably parted out to fix other
-  machines.</span><br />
-  They continue walking.
 </p>
 <p>
-  After a while, they find themselves in a large, flattened area at the
+  Jack says: <span class="quote speech">Looks like these were already
-  bottom of the valley. It is full of machines standing between the trees,
+  out of order before they were abandoned.</span><br />
-  forming long rows and parted out just like the excavator they saw.<br />
+  He turns to Annie and James:
+  <span class="quote speech">This is an excavator. We&apos;re looking for
+  a big one like this, maybe a bit smaller, but not as small as that one
+  over there &ndash; and preferably without trees growing out of
+  it...</span><br />
+  He points to a mini excavator sitting askew on a tree trunk that had
+  grown through its floor and out the side.<br />
+  James asks: <span class="quote speech">Why not just use this big one?
+  What&apos;s wrong with it?</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">This thing&apos;s just done for. It&apos;s
+  more rust than steel, missing its tracks and hydraulics for the bucket,
+  and it looks like someone got a bit carried away trying to remove the
+  cab.</span><br />
+  They take a quick look at the other machines around them. Apart from the
+  two excavators, there is a dump truck, a <span class="comment"> what's
+  the name of that machine with a conveyor belt that sorts large rocks and
+  rubble from sand?
+  <!--
+    ChatGPT says "screening plant" but also refers to it as a
+    "vibrating belt sorter". Research that.
+    It also gives a good description of what it does:
+    "splits rubble into chunks, fines, and dust."
+  -->
+  </span>, and two loaders. All of them
+  are rusted beyond repair and missing integral parts.<br />
+</p>
+<p>
+  A bit further down the valley, they find a much larger assortment of
+  machines, parked in long rows and parted out just like the first ones
+  they saw.<br />
   Jack says: <span class="quote speech">Welcome to the machine graveyard.
   If memory serves right, there should be a few buildings back there and
   one of the main parking lots behind them.</span><br />
-  While they make their way over, Annie asks:
+  While they make their way through between the machines, Annie asks:<br />
   <span class="quote speech">So these machines dug out the dome?</span>
   <br />
   <span class="quote speech">Well... no. That was mostly done using
@@ -58,10 +67,11 @@
 </p>
 <p>
   The buildings are in rough shape, some much worse than others. Most
-  don&apos;t have rooves, a few have been completely reduced to piles of
+  don&apos;t have rooves, a few have been completely reduced to foundations
-  rubble on a foundation. On the other side, as Jack had said, is a parking
+  and piles of rubble. The four walk through a gap between them and find
-  lot. Instead of a forest, they find it mostly overgrown with bushes and
+  themselves on the parking lot. Instead of a forest, they find it mostly
-  young trees. They split up and start roaming the area.
+  overgrown with bushes and young trees. They split up and start roaming
+  the area.
 </p>
 <p class="comment">
   research that needs to be done:<br />
@@ -74,51 +84,20 @@
 <p>
   Annie calls the others over to one of the buildings.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">Look what I found...</span><br />
-  Michelle arrives first and has a chuckle. Jack arrives a moment later
+  Michelle arrives before Jack and she laughs. He arrives a moment
-  and peeks inside. There sits a cable shovel, a machine that looks like
+  later and peeks inside. There sits a cable shovel, partially covered
-  a hybrid between a crane and an excavator, partially covered in rubble
+  in rubble from the <span class="comment">caved-in? fallen-in?</span>
-  from the <span class="comment">caved-in? fallen-in?</span> roof. It is
+  roof &ndash; rusty but surprisingly intact.
-  rusty on the outside but looks otherwise surprisingly intact.<br />
+  <br />
-  He says: <span class="quote speech">That&apos;s ... uhhh ... kind of
+  Jack says: <span class="quote speech">That&apos;s ... uhhh ... kind of
   a historical artifact.</span><br />
-  James, who is just arriving, hears it and says:
-  <span class="quote speech">I mean, everything here is a historical
-  artifact...</span><br />
-  Jack responds: <span class="quote speech">Fair enough, but this thing
-  especially so.</span><br />
-  They step into the building.<br />
-  Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">Looks like it could just work
-  if we tried.</span><br />
-  Jack says: <span class="quote speech">I think we should look for a more
-  modern option first.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">I agree we should look for something more
-  modern, but might as well take a free win.</span><br />
-  She climbs onto the back of the machine and opens an access panel.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Just about mint condition in here. This thing
-  might fire right up. Anyone see a crank for this baby?</span><br />
-  She pats the side of a small engine that sits on top of a much larger
-  engine.
-</p>
-<p>
-  They start looking around in the rotting shelves and in the rubble on
-  the floor. Michelle jumps down and joins them. After a while,
-  Jack spots some rust right behind the rear end of the machine. He moves
-  some leaves aside and picks up a metal rod with two bends.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">You mean this one?</span><br />
-  Michelle comes over.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Yup, that&apos;ll do.</span><br />
-  She climbs back onto the the machine and shoves it into a protrusion on
-  the small engine. Then, she proceeds to crank it over. First carefully,
-  then more <span class="comment">translate: energisch</span>. After a
-  moment, it fires up for a brief instant... then nothing.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Aww. Almost but not quite.</span><br />
-  She unscrews the cap from the small fuel tank on top of it and peeks
-  inside.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Well that can&apos;t work.</span><br />
-  She jumps down and checks the tank for the main engine.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Nope.</span>
-</p>
   <!--
+  "I mean, everything here is a historical artifact."
+  "Fair enough, but this especially so."
+
+  There is also a kinda small hydraulic excavator.
+  They decide to make both work.
+
   This is for another chapter but here is a list of things they might do:
   - strip parts off of other machines
   - modify or create parts at the Ivydale train yard
@@ -132,15 +111,9 @@ This is for another chapter but here is a list of things they might do:
   - find a grabber attachment for the excavator
   - DIY electronics
   -->
+</p>
 <p>
-  <span class="comment">Research todo: On engines that had a pony
+  <span class="comment">missing section</span>
-  motor, was it common to use the same fuel across both engines or was it
-  sometimes a mix?</span><br />
-  They scavenge some gasoline from a nearby truck by loosening the
-  <span class="comment">translate: &Uuml;berwurfmutter</span> on a fuel
-  line and letting it drip into a glass bottle that James had found on
-  the ground. Michelle takes it back inside while the others continue
-  looking for diesel fuel.
 </p>
 <p>
   <span class="comment">