Commit Graph

14 Commits (1373d43b299eea4a9968f90c7b78bb5980e638e3)

Author SHA1 Message Date
BodgeMaster 3c6180bc30 general story: The dome city has a name now: Sunside Cove 2024-02-21 07:50:22 +01:00
BodgeMaster 9ae32034d6 01 Wake Up: Finally translate "dial tone"
Yup, great achievement. It took meeting with someone irl
for feedback to finally get around to it.
2024-02-01 20:17:22 +01:00
BodgeMaster ea3123eceb 01 Wake Up: revision
- make things more logical
- add detail
- wording
2024-01-08 20:55:15 +01:00
BodgeMaster c6c1db1909 01 Wake Up: minor revision
Fixing the inconsistency with how HDDs are operated between this
chapter and chapter 6.
2024-01-05 19:18:25 +01:00
BodgeMaster dfd7f305ee 01 Wake Up: minor revision 2024-01-04 08:08:33 +01:00
BodgeMaster 3dabdcceb3 01 Wake Up: Revision 2023-12-04 09:21:36 +01:00
BodgeMaster 803760393f 01 Wake Up: continue writing
The chapter is now mostly finished. There are definitely things that need
to be fixed but everything apart from revision should be done now.
2023-11-30 20:57:01 +01:00
BodgeMaster 0ab52a0390 01 Wakr up: extensive revision, remove obsolete outline 2023-11-07 07:36:36 +01:00
BodgeMaster c082b24483 01 Wake Up: More revision 2023-10-29 15:44:03 +01:00
BodgeMaster be5b871cd6 01, 04: Move the printer segment back where it fits better 2023-10-19 19:44:25 +02:00
BodgeMaster 43b09e986a 01 Wake Up: more revision 2023-10-19 19:41:37 +02:00
BodgeMaster 3de0a2555d 01 Wake Up: Revision, getting rid of the over-used literal thoughts, improve wording of a lot of things 2023-10-18 19:37:02 +02:00
BodgeMaster 2f4c6033c2 *: fix a critical bug in the JS that decorates paper sections
This bug would cause the decoration script to run in an infinite loop as it
presumably attempts to decorate new elements it itself created.

(Can’t say for sure, I’m using Otter Browser on a Pentium M which isn’t
exactly the most ideal development setup. lol)
2023-10-17 16:48:50 +02:00
BodgeMaster e523281a70 01, 02: Swap these chapters around
I originally wanted to let the story begin with Annie’s view of the
situation because I think that chapter is more interesting without
context but I have since decided that I’m just going to write Jack’s
intro in a way where it doesn’t provide said context.

This change probably still makes Annie’s intro less interesting but not
messing with the timeline is more important IMO.
2023-10-17 16:47:40 +02:00