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'zz' (End): remove HTML comments
2024-03-03 10:52:14 +01:00
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'zz' (End): revision
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This commit includes HTML comments with feedback I got.
2024-03-03 10:48:49 +01:00
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general story: The dome city has a name now: Sunside Cove
2024-02-21 07:50:22 +01:00
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05 Eventful Evening: start filling a gap
2024-02-19 23:29:03 +01:00
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'va' Alone: minor revision
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- air bottle → oxygen bottle
- fixed the spelling of airlock (used to have 'air lock' in some places)
2024-02-14 20:03:50 +01:00
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'ja' Erosion: Rewrite most of the chapter to be from Michelle’s perspective
2024-02-14 19:54:58 +01:00
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'ja' Erosion: revision
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I’m really just pushing my current local state to switch laptops.
2024-02-13 18:37:50 +01:00
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'mc' Welcome Home: continue writing
2024-02-02 09:23:11 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: Finally translate "dial tone"
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Yup, great achievement. It took meeting with someone irl
for feedback to finally get around to it.
2024-02-01 20:17:22 +01:00
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deployment-script: log files to stderr as they are added
2024-01-31 20:38:40 +01:00
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'pa' Basic Needs: revision of first two paragraphs
2024-01-31 08:22:34 +01:00
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'mc' Welcome Home: start writing
2024-01-30 10:09:40 +01:00
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'ja' Erosion: continue writing
2024-01-29 21:52:05 +01:00
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'ja' Erosion: start writing
2024-01-29 21:13:13 +01:00
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'ma' Escape: revision
2024-01-29 08:36:33 +01:00
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'mb' First Steps Outside: revision
2024-01-22 19:05:30 +01:00
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'km' Unhappy Engine Noises: tiny fix (unicode -> appropriate escape sequence)
2024-01-19 09:05:35 +01:00
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'km' Unhappy Engine Noises: start writing
2024-01-18 21:23:08 +01:00
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04 Return Null: minor revision
2024-01-17 20:29:52 +01:00
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'ka' I Like Trains: revision, fill in a gap
2024-01-17 09:05:06 +01:00
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03 A Simple Errand: minor revision
2024-01-11 19:05:20 +01:00
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02 Unlikely encounter: revision (mostly language improvements)
2024-01-09 19:00:59 +01:00
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style: adjust font size of terminal sections
2024-01-09 08:42:58 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: revision
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- make things more logical
- add detail
- wording
2024-01-08 20:55:15 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: minor revision
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Fixing the inconsistency with how HDDs are operated between this
chapter and chapter 6.
2024-01-05 19:18:25 +01:00
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06 Library At Night: revision
2024-01-04 20:27:04 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: minor revision
2024-01-04 08:08:33 +01:00
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html_resources/index_template: rework the text on the landing page
2023-12-28 08:42:42 +01:00
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06 Library At Night: tiny fixes
2023-12-26 18:57:22 +01:00
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05 Eventful Evening: Revision
2023-12-26 18:49:54 +01:00
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04 Return Null: Start writing (or continue, depending on how you look at it)
2023-12-20 20:52:43 +01:00
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03 A Simple Errand: minor revision
2023-12-18 18:17:23 +01:00
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02 Unlikely Encounter: more revision (minor fixes this time)
2023-12-14 20:51:47 +01:00
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02 Unlikely Encounter: Heavily revise the entire chapter
2023-12-13 20:33:44 +01:00
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index: mention chapter numbers and add a preliminary story name
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I thought "New Dawn" sounds kinda cool. It’s a very on-the-nose title,
I know. Might change at some point if I happen to come up with something
better. Or it might just stick, who knows?
2023-12-06 19:36:54 +01:00
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deployment-script: cut the ./ from the start of the chapter link
2023-12-06 18:59:46 +01:00
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deployment-script, style: Add chapter "numbers", add support for span.chapter
2023-12-06 18:11:28 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: Revision
2023-12-04 09:21:36 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: continue writing
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The chapter is now mostly finished. There are definitely things that need
to be fixed but everything apart from revision should be done now.
2023-11-30 20:57:01 +01:00
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'zd' (Nova Metropolis): continue writing
2023-11-29 19:19:28 +01:00
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'na' Telescope: Start writing
2023-11-28 08:41:44 +01:00
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notes/locations: more creativity pls
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Suggestions are welcome.
2023-11-23 08:27:20 +01:00
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'ma' Escape: don't mention the observatory
2023-11-23 08:22:02 +01:00
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'ma' Escape From Dome City -> Escape
2023-11-23 08:09:40 +01:00
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notes/story: updates
2023-11-23 07:58:21 +01:00
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'zz' (End): revision
2023-11-22 18:51:21 +01:00
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`zz`(End): Remove redundant outline
2023-11-22 18:04:42 +01:00
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'vb' (Emily incoming call): start writing
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not much tho
2023-11-22 17:46:25 +01:00
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'va' Alone: minor revision
2023-11-22 13:06:56 +01:00
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'ra' (Emily first contact): revision
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Tore out the section about the phone call entirely, revised the rest
2023-11-22 08:15:36 +01:00
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