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01 Wake Up: Revision
2023-12-04 09:21:36 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: continue writing
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The chapter is now mostly finished. There are definitely things that need
to be fixed but everything apart from revision should be done now.
2023-11-30 20:57:01 +01:00
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'zd' (Nova Metropolis): continue writing
2023-11-29 19:19:28 +01:00
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'na' Telescope: Start writing
2023-11-28 08:41:44 +01:00
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notes/locations: more creativity pls
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Suggestions are welcome.
2023-11-23 08:27:20 +01:00
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'ma' Escape: don't mention the observatory
2023-11-23 08:22:02 +01:00
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'ma' Escape From Dome City -> Escape
2023-11-23 08:09:40 +01:00
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notes/story: updates
2023-11-23 07:58:21 +01:00
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'zz' (End): revision
2023-11-22 18:51:21 +01:00
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`zz`(End): Remove redundant outline
2023-11-22 18:04:42 +01:00
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'vb' (Emily incoming call): start writing
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not much tho
2023-11-22 17:46:25 +01:00
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'va' Alone: minor revision
2023-11-22 13:06:56 +01:00
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'ra' (Emily first contact): revision
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Tore out the section about the phone call entirely, revised the rest
2023-11-22 08:15:36 +01:00
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misc: add text scrambler
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A small program that randomly flips bits in a string,
limited to printable characters
This is intended for generating messed up text for corrupted communication
2023-11-21 18:37:14 +01:00
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'oa' Lab Rat: remove redundant outline, format a line of dialog
2023-11-20 19:49:11 +01:00
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'oa' (Emily lab incident) -> Lab Rat
2023-11-20 19:37:00 +01:00
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'pa' Basic Needs: Revision
2023-11-20 19:19:07 +01:00
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'ka' (finding the train) -> I Like Trains
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ah yes, funny chapter name :^)
2023-11-15 08:58:55 +01:00
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'ka' (finding the train): revision
2023-11-15 08:50:54 +01:00
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'va' Alone: continue writing
2023-11-14 09:03:03 +01:00
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'va' Alone: continue writing
2023-11-13 18:30:51 +01:00
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'mb' First Steps Outside: reword a point in the outline to be more precise
2023-11-13 08:22:46 +01:00
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notes/story: rewrite most of the file so it is more readable
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The unfinished section is still Markdown.
2023-11-13 08:20:52 +01:00
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06 Library AT Night: remove redundant outline
2023-11-10 08:09:50 +01:00
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index: add missing closing p tag
2023-11-08 20:50:53 +01:00
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notes/setting: Change what caused the apocalypse
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The previous scenario never felt right and was too "preachy" for a fun story.
Politics don’t belong here.
2023-11-08 20:24:16 +01:00
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notes/products and brands: minor details
2023-11-08 20:11:16 +01:00
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04 Return Null: Add a crucial bit of information to the outline - the cause of the apocalypse
2023-11-08 08:44:00 +01:00
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03 A SImple Errand: remove redundant outline, wording, nit-pick in a comment
2023-11-08 08:27:43 +01:00
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02 Unlikely Encounter: Attempt to fix some of the problems that arise from this not being the first chapter anymore
2023-11-08 08:06:18 +01:00
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'qa' Overdue Maintenance: reordering some events
2023-11-07 07:50:00 +01:00
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01 Wakr up: extensive revision, remove obsolete outline
2023-11-07 07:36:36 +01:00
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'qa' Overdue Maintenance: continue writing and revise what was there
2023-11-01 19:48:51 +01:00
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01 Wake Up: More revision
2023-10-29 15:44:03 +01:00
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'qa' Overdue Maintenance: revision, lots of fixes
2023-10-26 17:18:17 +02:00
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'qa' Overdue Maintenance: start writing the chapter where they mess with the power station
2023-10-25 20:10:08 +02:00
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01, 04: Move the printer segment back where it fits better
2023-10-19 19:44:25 +02:00
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01 Wake Up: more revision
2023-10-19 19:41:37 +02:00
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02 Unlikely Encounter: revision (mostly just rewording some things)
2023-10-19 09:22:13 +02:00
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Someone pls remind me to check if Git's files are visible to the web server.
2023-10-18 19:45:40 +02:00
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01 Wake Up: Revision, getting rid of the over-used literal thoughts, improve wording of a lot of things
2023-10-18 19:37:02 +02:00
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style: fix <span class="quote non-speech"> missing its quotation marks
2023-10-18 18:24:06 +02:00
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*: fix a critical bug in the JS that decorates paper sections
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This bug would cause the decoration script to run in an infinite loop as it
presumably attempts to decorate new elements it itself created.
(Can’t say for sure, I’m using Otter Browser on a Pentium M which isn’t
exactly the most ideal development setup. lol)
2023-10-17 16:48:50 +02:00
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01, 02: Swap these chapters around
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I originally wanted to let the story begin with Annie’s view of the
situation because I think that chapter is more interesting without
context but I have since decided that I’m just going to write Jack’s
intro in a way where it doesn’t provide said context.
This change probably still makes Annie’s intro less interesting but not
messing with the timeline is more important IMO.
2023-10-17 16:47:40 +02:00
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Style: change the CSS classes for all kinds of quotes to be tagged with "quote" first
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Yes, this is boring code stuff. You may ignore this.
2023-10-16 19:15:52 +02:00
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style: Change span.paper_green to span.paper.green
2023-10-13 18:42:58 +02:00
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style: Ass <span class="snon-speech"> and make <span class="thought"> red in preparation for its removal
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I went a bit overboard with literal thought quotes and it didn't even fit
all my use cases so I decided to replace it with an alternative that better
fits what I want to use it for.
TODO: Change the solid triangle on <span class="speech"> for the open ones
currently used for <span class="non-speech"> and find a new symbol to use
for non-speech.
2023-10-13 18:14:54 +02:00
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02 Wake Up: change time of day
2023-10-13 17:26:23 +02:00
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02 Wake Up: Fill in a gap and rewrite a good portion of the chapter to match
2023-10-13 17:21:42 +02:00
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04 Return Null: Add rough chapter outline
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I’m not in the mood for writing detailed info-dumps as dialogs rn but
this chapter needs to be filled in eventually.
2023-10-10 18:41:32 +02:00
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