3de0a2555d
01 Wake Up: Revision, getting rid of the over-used literal thoughts, improve wording of a lot of things
2023-10-18 19:37:02 +02:00
540ac66e28
style: fix <span class="quote non-speech"> missing its quotation marks
2023-10-18 18:24:06 +02:00
2f4c6033c2
*: fix a critical bug in the JS that decorates paper sections
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This bug would cause the decoration script to run in an infinite loop as it
presumably attempts to decorate new elements it itself created.
(Can’t say for sure, I’m using Otter Browser on a Pentium M which isn’t
exactly the most ideal development setup. lol)
2023-10-17 16:48:50 +02:00
e523281a70
01, 02: Swap these chapters around
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I originally wanted to let the story begin with Annie’s view of the
situation because I think that chapter is more interesting without
context but I have since decided that I’m just going to write Jack’s
intro in a way where it doesn’t provide said context.
This change probably still makes Annie’s intro less interesting but not
messing with the timeline is more important IMO.
2023-10-17 16:47:40 +02:00
be488063cd
Style: change the CSS classes for all kinds of quotes to be tagged with "quote" first
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Yes, this is boring code stuff. You may ignore this.
2023-10-16 19:15:52 +02:00
0d7114b970
style: Change span.paper_green to span.paper.green
2023-10-13 18:42:58 +02:00
340fde4235
style: Ass <span class="snon-speech"> and make <span class="thought"> red in preparation for its removal
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I went a bit overboard with literal thought quotes and it didn't even fit
all my use cases so I decided to replace it with an alternative that better
fits what I want to use it for.
TODO: Change the solid triangle on <span class="speech"> for the open ones
currently used for <span class="non-speech"> and find a new symbol to use
for non-speech.
2023-10-13 18:14:54 +02:00
00e23b376a
02 Wake Up: change time of day
2023-10-13 17:26:23 +02:00
53f738f2e5
02 Wake Up: Fill in a gap and rewrite a good portion of the chapter to match
2023-10-13 17:21:42 +02:00
96f8205955
04 Return Null: Add rough chapter outline
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I’m not in the mood for writing detailed info-dumps as dialogs rn but
this chapter needs to be filled in eventually.
2023-10-10 18:41:32 +02:00
9f65f9c793
05 Eventful Evening: language improvements, fix of a critical logic error
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Originally, I had the idea that any knowledge of the outside world is
forbidden knowledge but I have since decided (and written with the
assumption) that people generally know of the outside world but regard it
as completely uninhabitable.
2023-10-10 08:03:29 +02:00
1cba1cec4a
03 A Simple Errand: fill in the end of the chapter
2023-10-09 19:00:56 +02:00
962b6f2a19
03 A Simple Errand: language improvements
2023-10-09 18:58:48 +02:00
c1fb12f378
ToC: Fix a grammar error and an issue where chapters could be shuffled
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Yes, I just assumed that `find` returns a nicely sorted list of files.
Now, I’m running them through `sort` to ensure the list is actually sorted.
2023-10-09 18:38:24 +02:00
9a545b22ad
index: add a comma
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This is the end of my spam for today, I promise. I’m going to sleep now.
2023-10-09 00:22:32 +02:00
1735f7c5e7
index: Make a better version of what I just did
2023-10-09 00:21:10 +02:00
43e79d9cd5
index: Add a little bit of context on the landing page.
2023-10-09 00:07:37 +02:00
d1e67f206d
02 Wake Up: Fix a syntax error
2023-10-08 23:44:26 +02:00
019846a87a
deployment-script: Only include chapters in the ToC
2023-10-08 23:05:00 +02:00
9d2b65bbb0
Add copyright notice to all pages
2023-10-07 21:52:51 +02:00
24e9bf1895
'ga','oa','ra','va' (moon chapters): language improvements
2023-10-07 16:46:36 +02:00
7645eceac0
The third named moon inhabitant actually has a name now: Sasha
2023-10-07 16:16:28 +02:00
7d906a11b3
'mb' First Steps Outside: language improvements and get rid of contrived section
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I didn't like how that section where they return to the train turned out.
(As mentioned in the comment directly following it...)
So I removed it.
2023-10-06 18:06:43 +02:00
f19eafb211
gitignore: Add Nano’s .swp files
2023-10-06 17:36:42 +02:00
19f4f299c2
de-utf8-ify apostrophes
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’ → '
2023-10-04 22:58:58 +02:00
b1645b06c2
'mb' First Steps Outside: revision
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Shuffled things around, improved some things, made some things worse.
I’m probably gonna undo some of the changes made here but there are
language improvements in here as well that I wanna keep.
2023-10-04 22:55:10 +02:00
2348f48f6f
'mb' First Steps Outside: revision
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Some minor language improvements and a fix for the section with the
railing being before Annie voicing her astonishment of what she sees.
2023-10-04 08:27:12 +02:00
c173c1c49a
ToC: add a link to notes
2023-10-03 20:08:16 +02:00
9809af15c4
make deployment-script executable
2023-10-03 20:03:53 +02:00
919ed6913d
Bye bye, Markdown version!
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This commit includes the conversion of the Markdown notes to raw text files.
Well... Except for one bc I really cba.
2023-10-03 19:47:39 +02:00
3e9626c499
Consistent naming across all chapters: Center Square -> Central Square
2023-10-03 19:14:37 +02:00
6a2f7e3d34
replace index.php with index.html
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The index doesn’t have to be a PHP file since there is no need to
generate the list of chapters anew every time the ToC is opened.
Instead, the list of chapters is generated once, ahead of time, and
saved to the index.html.
As an added bonus, this allows the ToC to be generated and used
as a local file.
2023-10-03 19:10:54 +02:00
bea947d6ff
'ma' Escape From Dome City, 'mb' Firs Steps Outside: revision
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Partially following comments I left while converting the whole thing to
HTML, partially I just saw something that I wanted to change.
I found somelogic issues that I’m gonna have to fix another time.
2023-10-01 23:16:49 +02:00
099e892f67
02 Wake Up: Fill in a commented section
2023-09-29 14:19:25 +02:00
43d3075d46
01 Unlikely Encounter: refine language around Annie rarely going to the basement
2023-09-29 08:20:13 +02:00
c7f8f9859d
HTML version: convert 'zz' and do some slight revisioning
2023-09-28 21:13:07 +02:00
c4fad9d187
HTML version: convert 'zy'
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Same deal as before: did some minor revision while I was at it
2023-09-28 18:59:11 +02:00
af8b9112bd
Forgot to say that I did a little bit of revision in the previous commit.
2023-09-28 18:34:45 +02:00
a248b0a012
HTML version: convert 'zd'
2023-09-28 18:17:00 +02:00
9a5c06629f
'zb' (Reaching Nova Metropolis): Fix up what I created yesterday
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Sometimes, I should really proofread what I write.
2023-09-28 07:49:03 +02:00
749e09ee55
Old version: Move all files that already have an HTML version into a separate directory
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This is to be deleted once everything is fully in HTML.
2023-09-27 18:23:21 +02:00
314e92f340
'zb': convert to HTML and revise
2023-09-27 18:22:21 +02:00
7d34765eea
zd: Start working on a section about exploring Nova Metropolis
2023-09-26 18:21:18 +02:00
22e8f41252
HTML version: Start working on an index.php that will list all the chapters
2023-09-26 06:59:11 +02:00
ba6e242ea6
HTML version: convert another file
2023-09-26 06:58:19 +02:00
cc8416f4d4
HTML version: Add a back button
2023-09-23 11:12:00 +02:00
81952cac86
HTML version: minor formatting fix in chapter 06
2023-09-22 21:57:51 +02:00
15488d3877
HTML style: make formatting of <span class="speech"> and <span class="thought"> less obnoxious
2023-09-22 21:56:12 +02:00
3123a72d3e
HTML version: bring over 'mb', 'oa', 'pa', 'ra', 'va'
2023-09-22 19:42:13 +02:00
501d189927
HTML version: fix formatting of chapter 'ma'
2023-09-20 07:06:27 +02:00
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