cb459197b2
notes/story: rewrite most of the file so it is more readable
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The unfinished section is still Markdown.
2023-11-13 08:20:52 +01:00
ae844cbe85
06 Library AT Night: remove redundant outline
2023-11-10 08:09:50 +01:00
3ae1210412
index: add missing closing p tag
2023-11-08 20:50:53 +01:00
6aaa4b9df9
notes/setting: Change what caused the apocalypse
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The previous scenario never felt right and was too "preachy" for a fun story.
Politics don’t belong here.
2023-11-08 20:24:16 +01:00
66e433419c
notes/products and brands: minor details
2023-11-08 20:11:16 +01:00
07e28a6bfa
04 Return Null: Add a crucial bit of information to the outline - the cause of the apocalypse
2023-11-08 08:44:00 +01:00
e4e592dc13
03 A SImple Errand: remove redundant outline, wording, nit-pick in a comment
2023-11-08 08:27:43 +01:00
68a2cbc42d
02 Unlikely Encounter: Attempt to fix some of the problems that arise from this not being the first chapter anymore
2023-11-08 08:06:18 +01:00
91fddc2b46
'qa' Overdue Maintenance: reordering some events
2023-11-07 07:50:00 +01:00
0ab52a0390
01 Wakr up: extensive revision, remove obsolete outline
2023-11-07 07:36:36 +01:00
4204de2863
'qa' Overdue Maintenance: continue writing and revise what was there
2023-11-01 19:48:51 +01:00
c082b24483
01 Wake Up: More revision
2023-10-29 15:44:03 +01:00
eb39b059c5
'qa' Overdue Maintenance: revision, lots of fixes
2023-10-26 17:18:17 +02:00
a394eab28d
'qa' Overdue Maintenance: start writing the chapter where they mess with the power station
2023-10-25 20:10:08 +02:00
be5b871cd6
01, 04: Move the printer segment back where it fits better
2023-10-19 19:44:25 +02:00
43b09e986a
01 Wake Up: more revision
2023-10-19 19:41:37 +02:00
485193c724
02 Unlikely Encounter: revision (mostly just rewording some things)
2023-10-19 09:22:13 +02:00
d46694190c
Someone pls remind me to check if Git's files are visible to the web server.
2023-10-18 19:45:40 +02:00
3de0a2555d
01 Wake Up: Revision, getting rid of the over-used literal thoughts, improve wording of a lot of things
2023-10-18 19:37:02 +02:00
540ac66e28
style: fix <span class="quote non-speech"> missing its quotation marks
2023-10-18 18:24:06 +02:00
2f4c6033c2
*: fix a critical bug in the JS that decorates paper sections
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This bug would cause the decoration script to run in an infinite loop as it
presumably attempts to decorate new elements it itself created.
(Can’t say for sure, I’m using Otter Browser on a Pentium M which isn’t
exactly the most ideal development setup. lol)
2023-10-17 16:48:50 +02:00
e523281a70
01, 02: Swap these chapters around
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I originally wanted to let the story begin with Annie’s view of the
situation because I think that chapter is more interesting without
context but I have since decided that I’m just going to write Jack’s
intro in a way where it doesn’t provide said context.
This change probably still makes Annie’s intro less interesting but not
messing with the timeline is more important IMO.
2023-10-17 16:47:40 +02:00
be488063cd
Style: change the CSS classes for all kinds of quotes to be tagged with "quote" first
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Yes, this is boring code stuff. You may ignore this.
2023-10-16 19:15:52 +02:00
0d7114b970
style: Change span.paper_green to span.paper.green
2023-10-13 18:42:58 +02:00
340fde4235
style: Ass <span class="snon-speech"> and make <span class="thought"> red in preparation for its removal
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I went a bit overboard with literal thought quotes and it didn't even fit
all my use cases so I decided to replace it with an alternative that better
fits what I want to use it for.
TODO: Change the solid triangle on <span class="speech"> for the open ones
currently used for <span class="non-speech"> and find a new symbol to use
for non-speech.
2023-10-13 18:14:54 +02:00
00e23b376a
02 Wake Up: change time of day
2023-10-13 17:26:23 +02:00
53f738f2e5
02 Wake Up: Fill in a gap and rewrite a good portion of the chapter to match
2023-10-13 17:21:42 +02:00
96f8205955
04 Return Null: Add rough chapter outline
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I’m not in the mood for writing detailed info-dumps as dialogs rn but
this chapter needs to be filled in eventually.
2023-10-10 18:41:32 +02:00
9f65f9c793
05 Eventful Evening: language improvements, fix of a critical logic error
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Originally, I had the idea that any knowledge of the outside world is
forbidden knowledge but I have since decided (and written with the
assumption) that people generally know of the outside world but regard it
as completely uninhabitable.
2023-10-10 08:03:29 +02:00
1cba1cec4a
03 A Simple Errand: fill in the end of the chapter
2023-10-09 19:00:56 +02:00
962b6f2a19
03 A Simple Errand: language improvements
2023-10-09 18:58:48 +02:00
c1fb12f378
ToC: Fix a grammar error and an issue where chapters could be shuffled
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Yes, I just assumed that `find` returns a nicely sorted list of files.
Now, I’m running them through `sort` to ensure the list is actually sorted.
2023-10-09 18:38:24 +02:00
9a545b22ad
index: add a comma
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This is the end of my spam for today, I promise. I’m going to sleep now.
2023-10-09 00:22:32 +02:00
1735f7c5e7
index: Make a better version of what I just did
2023-10-09 00:21:10 +02:00
43e79d9cd5
index: Add a little bit of context on the landing page.
2023-10-09 00:07:37 +02:00
d1e67f206d
02 Wake Up: Fix a syntax error
2023-10-08 23:44:26 +02:00
019846a87a
deployment-script: Only include chapters in the ToC
2023-10-08 23:05:00 +02:00
9d2b65bbb0
Add copyright notice to all pages
2023-10-07 21:52:51 +02:00
24e9bf1895
'ga','oa','ra','va' (moon chapters): language improvements
2023-10-07 16:46:36 +02:00
7645eceac0
The third named moon inhabitant actually has a name now: Sasha
2023-10-07 16:16:28 +02:00
7d906a11b3
'mb' First Steps Outside: language improvements and get rid of contrived section
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I didn't like how that section where they return to the train turned out.
(As mentioned in the comment directly following it...)
So I removed it.
2023-10-06 18:06:43 +02:00
f19eafb211
gitignore: Add Nano’s .swp files
2023-10-06 17:36:42 +02:00
19f4f299c2
de-utf8-ify apostrophes
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’ → '
2023-10-04 22:58:58 +02:00
b1645b06c2
'mb' First Steps Outside: revision
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Shuffled things around, improved some things, made some things worse.
I’m probably gonna undo some of the changes made here but there are
language improvements in here as well that I wanna keep.
2023-10-04 22:55:10 +02:00
2348f48f6f
'mb' First Steps Outside: revision
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Some minor language improvements and a fix for the section with the
railing being before Annie voicing her astonishment of what she sees.
2023-10-04 08:27:12 +02:00
c173c1c49a
ToC: add a link to notes
2023-10-03 20:08:16 +02:00
9809af15c4
make deployment-script executable
2023-10-03 20:03:53 +02:00
919ed6913d
Bye bye, Markdown version!
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This commit includes the conversion of the Markdown notes to raw text files.
Well... Except for one bc I really cba.
2023-10-03 19:47:39 +02:00
3e9626c499
Consistent naming across all chapters: Center Square -> Central Square
2023-10-03 19:14:37 +02:00
6a2f7e3d34
replace index.php with index.html
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The index doesn’t have to be a PHP file since there is no need to
generate the list of chapters anew every time the ToC is opened.
Instead, the list of chapters is generated once, ahead of time, and
saved to the index.html.
As an added bonus, this allows the ToC to be generated and used
as a local file.
2023-10-03 19:10:54 +02:00
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